Monday, February 2, 2009
My old friend
Hai…Today I want to share with yours about my old friends also my best friends. When I 12 years old I have friend, her name is Nor Hafizah. Her so kind with me. We always eat and share food together.. She like cooking..ermm.. But when we in form one we must go to different school because her house so far from my school..Because that until now we loss contact..I so miss her…
Subscribe to:
Post Comments (Atom)
there are a lot of mistake in your essay...
ReplyDeletethis is the essay of your after having some correction...
Hai…Today I want to share with you about my old friends and also my best friends. When I 12 years old I have a friend and her name is Nor Hafizah.She very kind to me.We always eat and share food together.. She like cooking..ermm.. But when we were form one we must to go to different school because her house so far from my school..Because of that,we loss contact until now..I'm very miss her…
Thank you for your comment….and thank you because help me in this essay…hehehe..actually i needed help from another friends especially in English language…because I cannot write English essay very well…I hope next time you can help me if I make mistake…not only me but also another friends..okay??? so, thank you…
ReplyDelete